Kinicky Posted October 2, 2007 Report Share Posted October 2, 2007 Withdrawal is setting in. I have nothing to kill my time with at work. Seconded. I have to actually like... work. WTH is THAT about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mattamue Posted October 11, 2007 Report Share Posted October 11, 2007 Will your boss let you work on your story if I say please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raargant Posted October 30, 2007 Report Share Posted October 30, 2007 Coming tomorrow (or the day after at latest): Chapter 12. A sneak peek preview is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinicky Posted October 30, 2007 Report Share Posted October 30, 2007 Raargant, I had just managed to kick the habit. And then... in comes the dealer, drawing in the wayward flock and reawakening our latent addictions. Just a taste, he says. A peek of what is to come... And then he has you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zrothum Posted October 30, 2007 Report Share Posted October 30, 2007 Where is the Ogre hero Dharg that saves the world and the damsels and owns everyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest emp_newb Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 He died in the Preface. Raped by Halfling warriors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raargant Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 No spam please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aulian Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 Yeah we all know Zrothum isn't story worthy on any level. (unless its about protecting your mothers) Ah... Raar i have been waiting for this for such a long time Good stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Celerity Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 It would be much more interesting if you used characters from FL. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raargant Posted October 31, 2007 Report Share Posted October 31, 2007 This aint a fanfic, sweetie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest emp_newb Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 Raar, major props, I should have guessed creative righting would be one of your strongpoints. You left handed elven woman you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aulian Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 Raar' date=' major props, I should have guessed [b']creative righting would be one of your strongpoints. You left handed elven woman you I take it its not one of yours? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest emp_newb Posted November 1, 2007 Report Share Posted November 1, 2007 you don't tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raargant Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 A bit of stuff came up, so I wasn't able to finish the entire chapter. The rest should be up later tonight; for now, for those who may or may not be on, the first few pages of Chapter 12 are up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aulian Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 happiness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raargant Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 Alright, gentlemen, the newest chapter is up. Sorry for delay. Chapter 12: The Sea of Regret This one is very raw and unedited, so feel free to make criticisms on places where it doesn't seem to flow very well. I will go through and edit it myself when I have the time, of course, but still... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evangelion Posted November 5, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 The thing that irritated me was the fact that you used the word progenitor twice in the span of a single forum post. SAT words like that should be used sparingly, and with great care, lest you depreciate the value of the word. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raargant Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 Comes from not editing. Is changed. Ty. PS: That was fast. What were you doing, stalking the thread? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zrothum Posted November 5, 2007 Report Share Posted November 5, 2007 I've just read the entire thing, chapters 1-12, for the first time. Impressive, Raargant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mattamue Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 Ch 12 impression: I don't feel much sympathy for Mat right now. He got what he wanted just not the way he wanted it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Evangelion Posted November 6, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 Comes from not editing. Is changed. Ty. PS: That was fast. What were you doing, stalking the thread? What can I say? I enjoy your writing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
corpsestomp Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 As always, Raar, well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pali Posted November 6, 2007 Report Share Posted November 6, 2007 I'll be the first to do it... We demand MORE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kinicky Posted November 9, 2007 Report Share Posted November 9, 2007 The Willow Forest monastery is supposed to be hundreds of leagues to the west, Matheius thought to himself. How did we get here? He was just about to apologize for trespassing on the monastery grounds, when once again, Frost spoke first. “This can’t be the Willow Forest monastery,” Frost said sharply, a strange look in his eyes. “The monastery was razed half a century ago.” Matheius stared at Frost. That was something he did not know. The monk confirmed Frost’s words as he laughed gently and nodded. “That is true,” the monk said. “The original Willow Palm monastery was indeed burned to the ground. But so long as there is the Dharma, there is the Sangha. And so long as there is the Sangha, there will always be a Willow Palm monastery.” I noticed that the name of the monastery changed here from Willow Forest to WIllow Palm. As you read on, it stays Willow Palm for abit, then changes back to being referred to as Willow Forest again. Are the two names interchangeable? Is it known by different names in different places? This brought up a fair amount of questions for me that, if they are not eventually going to be addressed, only served to bring me out of the storyline to ponder the change. In my opinion, unless the differing names have a deeper meaning that will be revealed later on, keep it simple. Keep it uniform. Aside from that, I once again found myself drawn into your writing. Very well done. Might I pre-order a copy when it is complete? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raargant Posted November 9, 2007 Report Share Posted November 9, 2007 Gah. Error. Changed in my copy. Thanks for the catch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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