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In the past few months, the rate has been, what, 1-2 chapters a month, tops? I'm going to try to bump it up to around 2 chapters a week, like I did when I first started. So everything should be done in 3 months or so, on the outside.

Try to think of it as a really long pause in posting, with a really big monster update.

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One small error is all I caught on a preliminary read:

His battle-staff clattered to the floor, released by suddenly nervous hands. It was followed shortly by a thudding sound as Tuoh, too, collapsed. For a full ten seconds, he writhed on the floor, consumed by the greatest pain he had ever imagined. Ten seconds, but it felt like a lifetime. Even when the burning sensation finally did die away, the pain lingered, departing only slowly.

I could be wrong, but I would wager that you meant nerveless instead of nervous.

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