Twinblades713 Posted August 23, 2012 Report Share Posted August 23, 2012 Alas I doubt the same silly whimsy will again become me. It is too risky, too un-neat and where a want is placed sad retribution waits on fate's shoulder. But what once fun, done and undone comes but once. The disenlightened magnitude of real brought close wonderers as breadth of bands of rubber stretched. Abruptly snapped all potential as dull, wan monotony crawls back, the lethargy underwhelms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Implementor Volgathras Posted August 23, 2012 Implementor Report Share Posted August 23, 2012 Very nice. The cadence and composition are interesting, and represent the title well. What else ya got? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twinblades713 Posted August 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 23, 2012 Oh I have too much, haha. I was a little drunk when I wrote and posted that. edit: Enjambment is one of my favorite writing tools. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imoutgoodbye Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Nice to see I'm not the only one who enjoys goin' to e.e. town. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twinblades713 Posted August 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 I prefer Plath considerably more, but Mr. C has his moments. I wrote this one though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imoutgoodbye Posted August 24, 2012 Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Aware that you wrote it I am. Imply not otherwise would I, Daddy. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twinblades713 Posted August 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2012 Wouldn't be the first time that bastard tried to take credit for my work. D:< I will murder a poet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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