Argo Posted June 4, 2015 Report Share Posted June 4, 2015 I was hoping if at all possible if people wouldn't mind me taking a gander at their character histories. I've never written one before so I was curious if you write it in the 1st person or not, length, format etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enethier Posted June 4, 2015 Report Share Posted June 4, 2015 Your history is:Laelanis Zareerae assumed her position as Matron Mother of House Zareeraeat the age of 176, when she dispatched her mother with venom from a spider'sfangs. After coming into power, Laelanis quickly furthered her associationswith the Great House Ghourden, offering servitude for protection from otherlesser Houses. Over the next two centuries, relations with House Ghourdenhad improved tremendously, with Laelanis ever playing the role of thedutiful thrall to House Ghourden's Matron Mother. Over this course of time,however, Laelanis had begun work to fulfill the millenia-long plot laid outby her ancestors to seize the power of a Great House. Through the use ofHouse Ghourden's own slaves, she toppled the Great House in the dead ofnight, reducing it to ash in but a few hours. Immediately after, Laelanisaligned herself with the Cartel of the surface world, strengthening hernewfound strangle hold on Xymerria's slave trade. Your purpose is:Laelanis is a paragon of ambition and subtlety. Her plots are many andspan ages. Her rise to power, albeit swift in the eyes of the surfaceraces, was founded upon centuries of planning, even predating her birth.Despite whispers that she has grown soft in her position, dealing with thesurface races in ways unfitting a drowess of her stature, there lies a darkambition in her whispers. Some speak of a war she has yet to visit upon thelesser races, of her desired dominion over all that walk the world. Shepays these whispers little mind, for they serve their purpose. Detractingfrom her true aims, they blind her fiercest competitors to her schemes.While they chases shadows left in the truths she presents as lies, she setsher eyes on a different prize. The ultimate Vassal of Lloth, she has takenthe preachings of Might, Ambition, Chaos, and Betrayal to heart. Such isthe core of her being and her own singular purpose. She seeks nothing elsethan to slay her own Dark Queen, and take her place among the Demonweb Pits. Your personality is:Laelanis is the definition of drow ambition. Everything she does iscentered on one of two things: The advancement of her place in drow society,and above that pleasing Lloth. Always, she fears the shadows. Even withinXymerria, especially within Xymerria, she sees her demise in every shadow.As she knows better than most, pleasing the Spider Queen and failing herhave but a thin line between them. If the jealousy and ambitions of herfellow drow do not bring her death, surely it will come as Lloth becomesbored with her pet. And thus, she ever watches over her shoulder. Trust,in her eyes, is the weakness which brings death. As such, she will nevertell a full truth. This is not to say that all she speaks are lies. Sheknows that the best lies are always sprinkled with pieces of the truth. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enethier Posted June 4, 2015 Report Share Posted June 4, 2015 The history editor has its own formatting tool, so I use that. I have also had histories written in the first person, so I doubt the perspective matters. For example: Your history is:I am designated Kasrilanivilandurmaz. My kind do not have names, asyours do. Our designations indicate which portion of this universe weobserve, as Watchers of the Words. -My kind, the Narysvalkexi, were created first among It's works. Beforethe universe itself took shape, It spoke us into existence, to serve asObservers to propagate It's words throughout the Endless All. Our duty hasalways been this, and so it will remain until the ends of our days. It wasin fulfilling this duty that the relevance of my story begins. -As my designation implies, I observe the galaxy annotatedKasridretijamunila, and all things that exist within this galaxy were myduty to observe. Every star is a star which I alone saw form. Each life alife which I alone laid eyes upon within its womb, its egg, or its seed. Infulfilling this duty, I caught my first glimpse of the great betrayal thatwould befall my people.-To understand why this betrayal is such a monumental act, one must knowthat It is revered among my people, not unlike your own, as a benevolentGod. It is said to love unconditionally, and that the works of evil in thisuniverse are the acts of It That Destroys. However, I observed the truth.The Narysvalkexi, though unaging, were never intended to live forever. Weare to be destroyed by what your races know as Demons. But that is not thefull betrayal. My kind believe Demons to be agents of It That Destroys. Ina way, I suppose they are not incorrect. -It That Destroys, however, is not what they believe. It is not someseparate entity, nor anti-thesis to It That Creates. No, they are one andthe same. It That Creates put those creatures in this universe to bringabout the end. When they destroy the Narysvalkexi, no new words will beread. Nothing new will come into existence, and the universe will drown insilence until the last star fades into darkness. That is the greatbetrayal. Our God has deemed us expendable. All of us. -This revelation was not enjoyed by the Seven, the first-spoken of theNarysvalkexi which serve as our cultural leaders. When I brought news ofthis treachery to them, they deemed it heresy. My wings were tornunceremoniously from my back, and burned within the core-forge ofJaraxinlaj, the First Star. To prevent my death, so too was my flesh searedand the wound cauterized. I was then banished to this backwater world,whereI will spend the remainder of my life, until the end comes for me. Withoutmy wings, I can no longer escape this world's atmosphere, nor fly among thecosmos. I died that day. Only a husk remains, empty and wandering. Your purpose is:My purpose has been taken from me. All that I am left with is hatred andenvy. Somehow, I will find a way off of this world. A way to return to thecosmos. And I will have my vengeance on the Seven for what they havewrought. Your personality is:The Narysvalkexi frown on individualism. Our duties have no room forsuch frivolence. In exile, however, I have found one that resonates withme. I am envious. I am loathing. I am prone to fits of rage, and yet Iretain my wits through it all. Your achievements are: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argo Posted June 4, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 4, 2015 Thank you, this helps a ton! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
f0xx Posted June 4, 2015 Report Share Posted June 4, 2015 Rangoku Broggen (Neutral Warmaster Ogre restrung into Ettin) History: Many years ago a great plague struck the lands of Aabahran. Its name unknown, the people later called it the Nameless. When the creature struck, a great horde of wizards and necromancers followed him. His army was great, but the mages worked hard to increase it even further - the necromancers were raising all the creatures of light that fell in the many battles and summoning many others from different planes of existence to join them. In their attempts to draw mindless creatures to aid the cause of the Nameless, they initiated many experiments in mixing the bloodlines of different strong, but not very intelligent and easily manipulated races, in attempt to create the perfect soldier - ruthless, mindless,fearless and capable. This is how it is said the lines of many of the evil races began - orcs, goblins and even trolls were all successful fruits of such experiments. Not all experiments were a success though. Inexperienced, the mages' first attempt was a bite too big for them - mixing the lines of the strongest of races in the lands of Aabahran - ogres and giants, they created a truly unruly abomination - a two headed giant with the mind of a spoiled child and the strength of hundred men - the Ettins quickly became the reason for most of the losses the forces of the Nameless suffered - they fought more among their own ranks than against the enemy. The mages tried to control them, but the split mind of the creatures posed a challenge even for the most skilled puppeteer. Eventually, the Nameless grew tired of them and slaughtered most of the two-headed beasts. Those that escaped, hid in the deepest of forests and caves, hoping their master would forget about them. The Nameless cared little of his slaves anyway, and had matters more important at his hands. So the Ettins survived, with the largest group of them settling in a forest south of the city of light - Val Miran. Still holding deep grudges towards the other races they shared territories with, during the time they served the Nameless, the years spent in the forest of Drkshtyre has somewhat managed to calm their senses. Nowadays they spend most of their time trying to figure out the nature of fire and because it seems so difficult, they often prefer to eat their goblin and orc meat raw. Purpose: Spending many years hunting different beasts, trying to light a fire, and generally surviving, the two-headed giant Rangoku, knew there was more to life than smashing orcs and goblins. Often he would see groups of adventurers from the city of Val Miran, wiping the forest clean out of oozes and then raiding their own settlements and hovels. He would often wonder, how such much smaller creatures, like elves, faeries and halflings are able to defeat the mighty Ettins. He knew he was a strong fighter himself, one who has killed countless orcs, but still, every time he would see such a party come crushing into his village, he would hide and watch. He knew it has something to do with magic, the thing he despises most, but that was not the whole story. Eventually it became clear to him - Ettins lacked discipline and organization. They lacked any real training and because of that, no matter their size, they fell like fodder every time such a raiding party would pay them a visit. He tried a few times to organise a proper defense plan, but every time an elder male would come and beat him up, just for the sake of it. Then some time later, heroes will come and kill that same elder male. The same story would repeat itself every couple of years and he felt extremely frustrating that there was nothing he could do to protect his village, to fight back the aggressors. Being as proud as he is, it wasn't an easy task to admit to himself that he was weak and he needed to train. In order to defend his homeland, he had to leave it and hope that it wouldn't perish by the time he would come back strong enough to make a difference. Personality: Two heads are better than one - not in this case though. The two headed giant, while a bit more intelligent than the average Ettin, is still nothing more than an idiot, compared to an average human. On top of that, the two heads are capable of independant thought and each controls one side of the body. While that makes him extremely alert and versed in fighting with two weapons, it also creates many situations of conflict, where the two heads will argue and even punch each other, despite them both sharing the sense of pain. Unlike the typical ettin, Rangoku has no evil tendencies, though his savage behavior can easily be mistaken for cruelty. The dominant head - the right one called Rangoku - is aggressive and always looking for trouble, often making fun of the other one. The left one on the other hand, which bears the name Broggen, is somewhat more sensible and diplomatic. They always strive for the same goals, but the purpose behind those is always different - while Broggen wants to get stronger so he can establish leadership over his tribe and teach them how to organise their defences, Rangoku wants the same, but in order to force himself as their leader and establish Tyranny and himself as undesputed ruler of the Ettin, then destroy the city of Val Miran which has been raiding their hovels for centuries. The result of this split in their personality often leads to unexpected results, which if favourable, are claimed as success to Rangoku, but if negative are blamed on Broggen. The two sides of the Ettin are constantly locked in a battle of wits, which eventually degrades into a quarrel which then degrades into an insult fest. More often than not though, Broggen manages to trick Rangoku into doing things the way he wants them to be done, which on the other hand makes the dominant side of the Ettin even more furious. The only thing that the two sides share a common opinion of is magic - both Rangoku and Broggen despise it, ironically to the fact that the whole Ettin race was created with its help. The crude Ettin strives to destroy every source of it and everyone who wields it, but he doesn't fail to recognise its power and often finds himself in awe and even fear because of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Imoutgoodbye Posted June 4, 2015 Report Share Posted June 4, 2015 Caerka Vishwau knows little about what it means to be an avian.She knows not who her parents were nor does she care. As a babyshe was placed on the monastery steps in Val Miran and left in the care of the Brothers and Sisters there. There was no note.No clue as to where she had come from. The monks attempted onseveral occasions to ascertain the lineage of the young ladyin their care as the years went on. All ventures to the tops ofall nearby mountain towns known to inhabit avians was fruitless. Caerka had a deep desire to learn the ways of the monastery andbecome a monk. The request was an odd one, for the monasterydidn't have and had never permitted an avian amongst its ranks.The Grand Mistress herself eventually handed down the decree thatCaerka was not to learn the art of advanced hand to hand combat.Her reasoning was not to be trifled with and the decree was simply accepted. As luck (or the ill fate of star crossed individuals) would haveit, there was a half elf trainee who was struck with Caerka'sbeauty. He often called her his Angel. Late at night, he beganto train Caerka in the beginnings of hand to hand combat andwould often tease her, remarking his hands unworthy of touchingher lest his unworthy hands desecrate her. For her part, Caerkawould often kiss his cheek and swear he dishonored his handstoo much. As luck is wont to do, it ran out. The half elf did not show one night for a training session. Rather than return to hersleeping quarters with the rest of the Sisters, Caerka choseto walk the grounds. In the stables was where she found him,passionately kissing a human female, both nearly naked. Shespread her wings silently, her hands feeling like stone and ice,tears brimming. Quietly, so quietly, she glided over both ofthem. The humans eyes widened with fear and she made a mufflednoise into the mouth of her lover, attempting to push him off.As the half-elf rolled to the side, Caerka's right hand, encased in a bright blue glow, plunged into her chest. Witha great sucking sound, she ripped the human's heart out andadmired the work. For his part, the half-elf fainted. Caerka flew away from the monastery with the heart in her hand.The rest, is well, as they say, history. PURPOSE: To create a friend who will always love herand never disappoint her. Since fleeing the monastic life style, Caerka has dedicatedherself to studies of epistemology and examing variousphilosophies to understand the workings of the soul.Her studies led her to the Dark Knight guild where she learned that the soul is not an object of reason, but offaith and belief, a domain adhered to most strictly bythe mysterious powers of death. Ever since, Caerka has prayed over weapons in the Shrineof Necropsy, hoping to please Lord of Necropsy, Morlhach,to simply be one of his chosen in Aabahran. PERSONALITY: Caerka has become slightly deranged from the betrayal of whatshe saw as her pure and divinely inspired chaste love. Forher, the half elf was the one. That he was not true has caused Caerka to have an intense hatred towards half elves,and by extension, elves and humans. Oddly enough, Caerkahas a weak spot for drow and considers the females to besisters to herself and the males are possible love interests. Her outlook on life in general is still a happy one becauseshe believes herself free of all outside interference. Herfavorite past time when travelling is to play word games andtease the way her group mates look at the world by forcingthem to question themselves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Argo Posted June 5, 2015 Author Report Share Posted June 5, 2015 Thanks All! I enjoyed reading them! Helped me get started on mine! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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